The rags are pretty bad and I will fix it along with the rivers of the body text. And yes, I need to tweak the kerning of the title as well.
I still haven't decided where to put the date and the magazine name but I think the best way to handle it without ruining the layout would be flipping it 90 degrees and lay it in conjunction with the number page. That and if it allows me to have the liberty to do so, I will place it on top of the grass and right beside the number page. I have a decent and solid layout. I am still not leaning 100 percent towards it but hopefully tomorrow's critique will help me improve it.
I still haven't decided where to put the date and the magazine name but I think the best way to handle it without ruining the layout would be flipping it 90 degrees and lay it in conjunction with the number page. That and if it allows me to have the liberty to do so, I will place it on top of the grass and right beside the number page. I have a decent and solid layout. I am still not leaning 100 percent towards it but hopefully tomorrow's critique will help me improve it.
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